Students at schools and universities learn far more from lessons with teachers
than from other sources (such as the Internet and television).To what extent do
you agree or disagree?
People are divided in their opinion regarding whether students should learn from their tutors or from the internet and television. This has given rise to the fervid question 'which is more beneficial'?. It is commonly said that student at school and tertiary institutions learn better with tutors than from other sources such as internet or television. In this essay, I totally agree with this notion.
Irrefutably, sometimes learning can become a daunting task which students find it difficult to comprehend. There are two major reasons why students should learn from tutors other than the internet. First and foremost, fewer distractions. If pupils learn lessons with teachers, they are unlikely to be distracted due to various tutors teaching methods. More so, teachers teach with up to date curriculum which makes their lectures less lively. A recent study by the USA has proven that 60% of pupils taught by teachers performs better when compared with those that learn from the internet. Secondly, lecturers undergo training programs that helps them inculcate knowledge in the student. With this, they can easily pass on helpful knowledge to assiduous students.The programs help tutors to stay up to date with the latest learning techniques and as a result, students do better. For example in Nigeria, teachers update their skills biannual through training programs organised by the government.This is known to be helpful and beneficial to pupils in schools and tertiary institutions. On the whole, the main reasons why students at school and universities learn more from teachers than internet or television are less distraction and teaching training programs organised by the government.
To recapitulate, The benefits of students learning from teachers cannot be over-emphasized. Therefore it is better for student at school to learn from tutors than from other sources such internet and television because of less distraction and teaching programs organised by the government. I reiterate my stand that I completely agree with the statement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, such as, as a result, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1735.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43887147335 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8622389193 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498432601881 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0483229469 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.058823529 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7647058824 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323224804055 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113680245095 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0848046494255 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.27189670918 0.151304729494 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417217546567 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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