Some cities have vehicle-free days, when private cars, trucks, motorcycles are banned in the city center. Public transportations like buses, taxis and metros are advised. To what extent do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
The vehicle-free days are popular in some cities to encourage citizens choosing buses, underground and taxis in the city centre. I completely support that the advantages of this policy are more than its disadvantages.
Public transportations improve the transporting efficiency, especially in crowded places like the city centre. To be more specific, residents spend less time traveling to destinations if private cars and motorcycles are not allowed to use in popular areas of the city. This is because traffic problems which result from vehicle amounts such as congestions and accidents could be prevented, making passengers arrive the city centre quicker than before. Thus, the transportation efficiency in crowded places would be enhanced with the control of private cars.
Limiting the number of vehicles in the city centre is benefit for the physical health of the public. Diseases related to the air quality would be avoided with the decrease of car emissions since such gas is the main source of air pollution. For example, some big cities in China such as Beijing and Shanghai encourage citizens to take public transportations by setting a low price of buses and undergrounds, aiming to improve the air quality in crowded areas since these cities are suffering a serious problem of air pollution.
However, some people may find it is inconvenient without using cars and motorcycles in the city centre. People who live far away from bus stations might spend more time traveling to the destination in such a crowded area. Thus, policies about vehicle-free may bring troubles to them.
In conclusion, I think vehicle-free has more advantages than disadvantages since it improves the transportation efficiency and is benefit for health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, thus, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32608695652 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02024430409 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550724637681 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6862460762 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.076923077 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53846153846 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255727821737 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0977216043589 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695823587965 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151637668925 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540100503091 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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