various reasons to attend university
Nowadays, everyone wants to make bright career. For that, university education is necessary. Everyone has different reasons to attend the university. It may vary upon requirements. Although, the plethora of people holds the opinion that to study in the college is beneficial for people to enhance their knowledge and for new experience, I believe that it is necessary for career preparation. I feel this way for many reasons which I will explore in following essay.
First of all, in modern era, it is very tough to become static in competitive environment. That is why university education is necessary. The graduation from the college is very important, since it is very burdensome to find job without degree. In past, it was very easy to get job. At that time, people were not enough capable to learn an importance about advanced education. People could able to find job without graduation. On the other hand, in the recent scenario, it is very difficult people to find best earning job without master. Therefore, people want to attend the university.
The second and the equally exquisite reason for this assertion is about learning in advance stage will be useful for people to find best job and to make bright future. If people try to study in advanced level, it would increase their abilities. This can be a best option for their career preparation. For instance, a person who want to find a job in hospital after M.D.S. Since, the person is very experienced and having master degree, he would be able to give good interview. There are many chances to him to get job due to his higher qualities.
Finally, in university, students have to do research work and other project works. These assignments are very important to them because they do these project works in the group. An ability to do team work is an important skill, which can be useful in job. For instance, in company, if a person is able to handle the group, he would have become the leader of group. Additionally, he is able to praise by owner, and ultimately it is a good reason for attending the college. However, other factors are also good reason to attend the university like for knowledge or to get new experience, but the career preparation is foremost reason for study an advanced education.
To sum up, people attend the university for their better future. This because it will make them able to get high salary job. An advanced level of education can increase the student status and their skills, which are sufficient for have a bright future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, for instance, i feel, first of all, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.0752688172 235% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2107.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 434.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85483870968 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65806855078 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.456221198157 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 684.0 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.9585547834 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.25 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146825612293 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052863573374 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0874440385912 0.0737576698707 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0960495347879 0.150856017488 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529629964992 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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