Childhood obesity is becoming a serious problem in many countries. Explain the main causes and effects of this problem, and suggest some possible solutions.
Infants are being suffered from different physical ailments nowadays and obesity is leading them all. In my essay, I will explain the reasons behind this problem, its effects and also shed some light on the adequate solutions in the forthcoming paragraphs.
To commence with, the first and the foremost cause of the obesity in children is their less physical activities in school and home. In the present scenario, children spent most of their time on the electronic gadgets instead of playing outside. As a result of it, they are not able to make more friends and they have been influenced by loneliness, anxiety and depression. Moreover, there is a scarcity of nutritious food in the market and children have habitual to eat junk food. Parents also have not enough time to cook healthy food on a regular basis due to the hectic lifestyle. Consequently, the body of the children is more prone to the food with unavailability of nutrients and they start come under the shadow of various diseases.
Furthermore, there is plethora of suggestions to overcome the problem of obesity. Firstly, parents should maintain their schedule in order to cook healthy food for the children. They should understand them about the bad impacts of the junk food. Moreover, children should not allow usage of the electronic gadgets such as iPods, mobile phones and computers. There should be some space for the physical activities in their daily routine. Apart from this, school curriculum should also be established by considering the games period and students who are give excellent in sports should be rewarded in order to motivate others.
In conclusion, in my opinion, childhood obesity is the root of all the other hazardous diseases which can be harmful if controlled initially.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 52, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'ailments'' or 'ailment's'?
Suggestion: ailments'; ailment's
... being suffered from different physical ailments nowadays and obesity is leading them al...
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Line 5, column 519, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'games'' or 'game's'?
Suggestion: games'; game's
... also be established by considering the games period and students who are give excell...
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Line 5, column 545, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...nsidering the games period and students who are give excellent in sports should be rewa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, apart from, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12714776632 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70928584753 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567010309278 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.6288194883 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4666666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113992227022 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0394423007301 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609279655585 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0803503061499 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589355385542 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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