Childhood obesity is becoming a serious problem in many countries. Explain the main causes and effects of this problem, and suggest some possible solutions.
Nowadays, more and more children are becoming obese, and it could have detrimental effects on them when they become older. In this essay I will look at some reasons for this trend and suggest some solutions.
Obesity among children is spreading, and I believe the main factor is consumption of junk foods which is full of fat. Having an unhealthy diet will boost the risk of many diseases such as cancer, heart attack and diabetes. Another issue is that juveniles tend to have a sedentary lifestyles. Lack of exercise leads to accumulation of harmful substances such as saturated fats in their bodies, so again they are in danger of diseases were mentioned above. Furthermore, obesity can have negative impacts on social contacts of our child and causes a feeling of embarrassment for them. Also being overweight could affect their adulthood. Posture problems, sleep disorders, breathing problems, high cholesterol and many other troubles are chasing them if we do not take it seriously.
However, there are various steps that schools, governments and parents could take to tackle it. Firstly, parents should prepare wholesome meals which are delicious and look appealing to them. One way for it is that instead of fried food, they can use other methods of cooking like steaming or boiling. Secondly, governments should limit junk foods advertising or school authorities could ban selling unhealthy food at school. Another option is that food companies be forced to put nutrition label on their product. This could act as a deterrent when consumer see those information. A third option would be to encourage children to take regular exercise, for example, parents could set specific time for doing physical activity with family which is full of enjoyments for kids.
In conclusion, although obesity is a major problem among youngster, we could address it by changing their lifestyle and the help of authorities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 280, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'lifestyle'?
Suggestion: lifestyle
...that juveniles tend to have a sedentary lifestyles. Lack of exercise leads to accumulation...
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Line 2, column 582, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...es a feeling of embarrassment for them. Also being overweight could affect their adu...
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Line 3, column 563, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'those informations'?
Suggestion: this information; those informations
...ld act as a deterrent when consumer see those information. A third option would be to encourage c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, third, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1607.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18387096774 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7103474594 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632258064516 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.554042884 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5294117647 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2352941176 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.47058823529 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131560404036 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.037179014872 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549502188355 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0981272119448 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0737714041486 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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