Many companies invest their money in sport games for advertisement purposes. Some people think it is good for the sport world, while others believe that it has some disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People have different views about effects of invested money by companies with regard to advertisement goals in the sport world. While some argue that these adverts can sometimes have a harmful impact, I believe that they are more likely to be beneficial.
There are various reasons why people believe that expend money on advertisement could have negative results for the world of sport. They may assert that aim of sport which is health and wellness, might contrary to some of the adverts, because they are tempting customer for buying unhealthy products like sugary drink or snacks which are contained large amount of fat and salt. Another reason why these group consider advertisement of corporations on the field of sport as disadvantage is that they put pressure on parents to provide them for family members. Companies’ advertisers know how to use glamorous scenery and successful people to influence children and persuade them to buy things they do not need or things that fancier than useful.
On the other hand, advocates of business advertising for sport events believe that world of sport could benefit from advertisement. Firstly, sport is a costly entertainment. Supply equipment, maintenance stadiums and different payments from salary to travel to tournament place need a huge budget and advertising could be a main source of income to cover these expenses. Secondly, many deprived areas in the world with lots of talented individuals are waiting for someone to find them and many companies would donate their money as an advertisement to those areas. An advert that not only promotes company’s status also leads to discover an athlete.
Finally, in my opinion, company investment in sport games for the sake of advertisement goals could benefit more if authorities had more control on concept of adverts and even banned those are against soul of sports.
In conclusion, while there are negative points in some company advertisement that sponsored sport events, I believe that there would be more advantages to support them and we can solve its drawbacks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 214, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... health and wellness, might contrary to some of the adverts, because they are tempting cust...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, in conclusion, in my opinion, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1752.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22985074627 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82821604022 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573134328358 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.5444826881 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.769230769 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7692307692 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6153846154 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.388295819392 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139436273736 0.084324248473 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0832685494019 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211332475053 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312214201115 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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