Many people believe that cycling is a healthy and environmentally friendly mode of transport. However, it is still unpopular in many countries.
What are the reasons?
What could be done to encourage the use of bicycles among wider population.
It is true that cycling is a major concern in whole word. Majority of individuals deem that cycling is beneficial not for health, but also it is eco friendly mode of transport. However, opponents think that is it not preferable most of the countries.There are numerous reasons behind this problem. Whereas, in my opinion government should take steps to motivate people towards bicycle uses.
To begin with, bicycles are ignorance among populations, due to many causes. First and foremost reason is that it is a cheaper type of transport apart from this, they feel might down status symbol in society. Secondly, some individuals believe that it is slow mode of transport system, owing to in developing era, people might busy in their chores, therefore they have to cover long distance on few minutes. For instance, faster transports such as :- cars, buses and so on which work with fuel are safer for every age of individuals, because their have a plethora of safety devices are available.
However, government have to take steps encourage the use of bicycles among whole population, so they can use cheaper as well as, eco friendly transport. Firstly, camping which provides information to individuals how cycling assist reduce health and environment issues. Moreover, if people use it, which help to alleviate pollution and also save money. Hence, the use of bicycles play crucial role for keep fit and healthy body and disease free , due to the use of cycling exercises body tissues.
In conclusion, bicycles avoided by people.because, it is cheaper as well slow transport, but in my view, government have to take steps to encourage people to use this.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1389.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08791208791 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7699592741 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593406593407 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4972730265 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.846153846 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.8461538462 7.06120827912 239% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26153957558 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0862229038494 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052101347467 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151262458655 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345728357522 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.