Question in 11/10/2014, Vietnam:
Today more and more people are using mobile phones and computers. Thus, people are losing the ability to communicate face to face. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In recent days, teachers play a vital role in children life. Some of the people believe that guardians should teach the good good " style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-size: 19.36px; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">manner to their children. Although, others opine that that " style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-size: 19.36px; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">the environment of school is more preferable for students. Before focussing on my point of view, both the sites sites " style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-size: 19.36px; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">are discussed further.
focussing on the first view,parents are important role model in their children life. From the childhood, children follow their parents and they learn what they see, listen, or learn. Along with this, mother spend a lot time with their child so they know them very well. And when they behave wrong with other they suggest them. for example, when parents respect their elders children noticed and after that they go behind them.
Examining the other site, In recent days, Due to workaholic life, parents do not fully concentrate on their child. for that reason, they send their children in schools where they learn learn " style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-size: 19.36px; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">manner and improve their knowledge. teacher guide them as good as possible and they watch their pears behaviour.It is also very very " style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-size: 19.36px; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">essencials for the students to live in a good atmosphere and with good people.
In my opinion, parents and teacher both plays very very " style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-size: 19.36px; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">megnificiant rrole in children life style. they they " style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-size: 19.36px; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">provide them them " style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-size: 19.36px; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">guidelines, knowleage and educate them how to behave with others and how to respect respect " style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-size: 19.36px; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">peoples. both are crucial for child.
To summing up, parents aware about their child nature from childhood but in this hectic life they dispatch their children in schools. both the place are preferable for children.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 62, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...ers play a vital role in children life. Some of the people believe that guardians should te...
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Line 1, column 121, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: good
...believe that guardians should teach the good good ' style='color: rgb51, 51, 51...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: that
... their children. Although, others opine that that ' style='color: rgb51, 51, 51...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: sites
...focussing on my point of view, both the sites sites ' style='color: rgb51, 51, 51...
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Suggestion: Focussing
...5;'>are discussed further. focussing on the first view,parents are important...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , parents
...urther. focussing on the first view,parents are important role model in their child...
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Suggestion: For
...ave wrong with other they suggest them. for example, when parents respect their eld...
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Suggestion: For
...o not fully concentrate on their child. for that reason, they send their children i...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: learn
...nd their children in schools where they learn learn ' style='color: rgb51, 51, 51...
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to learn'
Suggestion: to learn
...ir children in schools where they learn learn ' style='color: rgb51, 51, 51...
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Suggestion: Teacher
...>manner and improve their knowledge. teacher guide them as good as possible and they...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...le and they watch their pears behaviour.It is also very very ' style='co...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: very
... watch their pears behaviour.It is also very very ' style='color: rgb51, 51, 51...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: very
...opinion, parents and teacher both plays very very ' style='color: rgb51, 51, 51...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...nificiant rrole in children life style. they they ' style='color: rgb51, 5...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: they
...nificiant rrole in children life style. they they ' style='color: rgb51, 51, 51...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: them
...lor: rgb255, 255, 255;'>provide them them ' style='color: rgb51, 51, 51...
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Line 9, column 591, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: respect
...em how to behave with others and how to respect respect ' style='color: rgb51, 51, 51...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Both
...or: rgb255, 255, 255;'>peoples. both are crucial for child. To summing up...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Both
...hey dispatch their children in schools. both the place are preferable for children. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, well, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2402.0 1615.20841683 149% => OK
No of words: 374.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 6.42245989305 5.12529762239 125% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.27528318004 2.80592935109 152% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.417112299465 0.561755894193 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 119.143453995 49.4020404114 241% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 141.294117647 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.41176470588 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.00980244256926 0.244688304435 4% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00600855808753 0.084324248473 7% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.010890859653 0.0667982634062 16% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0069314363234 0.151304729494 5% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00752940030218 0.056905535591 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.8 13.0946893788 151% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 19.96 12.4159519038 161% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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