Many things that used to be done in the home by hands are now being done by machines.
Does this development bring more advantages or disadvantages?
Today most of the people are doing their work by using machines to feel as comfortable as possible. There are certain merits and demerits too. In this essay, we are going to discuss both the views.
To begin with, In most of the cases, we can observe that people are more likely to depend on machines rather than doing hard work. There are some advantages to this aspect such as less time consumption, more accuracy and so on. To exemplify, before introducing ATM machines, a person used to stand in a big queue line in banks even to withdraw a small amount of money. Due to which, he might lose most of the time in a day and energy as well which is not at all required in this case. But after the introduction of ATm machines, people spend hardly 5 to 10 mins of time which saves a lot of time and energy.
On the contrary, It is also increasing laziness among people and making them unfit to do hard work. As per the government survey from the latest journal, percentage population of obese has been rapidly increased in the last ten years. From which we can grab a point that this might be the reason to get many diseases to human beings. To elucidate further, children in olden days used to play in grounds but now they are more fond of playing games on gadgets.
To sum up, everything will have some advantages and drawbacks. However, we need to make a self-assessment before accepting it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 262, Rule ID: ATM_MACHINE[2]
Message: This phrase is redundant ('M' stands for 'machine'). Use simply 'ATMs'.
Suggestion: ATMs
...so on. To exemplify, before introducing ATM machines, a person used to stand in a big queue ...
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Line 3, column 517, Rule ID: ATM_MACHINE[2]
Message: This phrase is redundant ('M' stands for 'machine'). Use simply 'ATms'.
Suggestion: ATms
...his case. But after the introduction of ATm machines, people spend hardly 5 to 10 mins of ti...
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Line 3, column 538, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'hardly' is usually put before the verb 'spend'.
Suggestion: hardly spend
...he introduction of ATm machines, people spend hardly 5 to 10 mins of time which saves a lot ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, such as, on the contrary, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1147.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46303501946 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4609410761 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618677042802 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 362.7 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.7308925204 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.9285714286 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3571428571 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161869201207 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0473353007471 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0371465804649 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0828869597918 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374068054242 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 12.4159519038 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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