Research suggests that the majority of criminals who are sen to prison commit crime when set free. What are the reasons? What can be done to solve the problem.
There is no denial that most of ex-prisoners continue their old path of committing crime besides a minority of reformed offenders. In this situation, there are a plenty of factors that brings about seriousness of this issue. Even though tackling such problem will not be straight forward, there are measures can be taken which I will demonstrate in this essay.
The driving forces behind this trend are numerous that it worth for human to take into account. One of the primary contributors is that serving a prison sentence are means of punishment so it is by no means act as a rehabilitation to reform prisoners. For instance, harsh penalty imposed on offenders which aim to cause abhorrence and keep them away from crime as well as the prison, however, sometimes it might be counterproductive. Another predominant factor is that they may have a sense of alienation of in the worst cases are being bullied by more dangerous criminals without the management of jailers. In results, after set free, there will be a profound impact on their emotion as well as psychology which turn them into new offenders. Furthermore, prisoners can imitate behaviour and be influenced by other offenders.
In order to address such serious issue I have expressed above, there are responsibilities lie in hands of government and individual. First of all, beside punishment, government should provide education to raise awareness or offer training class in order to help ex-lawbreakers to seek for a job and earn their living after being free. For instance, in some jail through the world, these measures have been carried out such as Korea where cooking class or mechanic class are opened from government subsidise money. Secondly, it is necessary for jailer to isolate dangerous offender from petty criminal so that there will be no longer negative affect and encouragement to re-offend.
In conclusion, although the causes of this pressing problem are important to drawn a concern in society. In contrast, there are also several solution in order to turn a prisoner into an helpful citizen.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 133, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun solution seems to be countable; consider using: 'several solutions'.
Suggestion: several solutions
...in society. In contrast, there are also several solution in order to turn a prisoner into an he...
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Line 4, column 177, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ral solution in order to turn a prisoner into an helpful citizen.
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Line 4, column 184, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ution in order to turn a prisoner into an helpful citizen.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, however, may, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1738.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09677419355 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92484912282 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595307917889 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1439098912 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.866666667 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7333333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4666666667 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146141163313 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476188187064 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385431329523 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0858879783802 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403632908807 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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