You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
explain why you want to take time off work
give details of the amount of time you need
suggest how your work could be covered while you are away
31 October 2019
Dear Mr.Chris:
My older brother is going to marry these days, and he also invited me. We have not seen each other for a long time, so I can not ignore his invitation. Furthermore, there will be a meeting of the whole family, including distant relatives, who will come from Germany, Russia, and Kazakhstan.
The period of being at the wedding is very short, 3 days only. I should fly to Almaty, afterward come back with the train.
In fact, that I have a major position in the corporation, I appointed Ms. Alya to my office. She had demonstrated success since being as a second manager for the week. Additionally, I reached an agreement with the design director of X company. He will show the new idea of our logo in our office in Almaty. In that case, it is much better because I will be able to edit a new design with him in real time.
I would very thankful if you could allow me to be absent from the 3rd of November to 6th of November. His marriage is a rare occasion for family gathering.
Yours sincerely,
Gleb Iundt
General manager "Y.Inc"
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 9, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Chris
31 October 2019 Dear Mr.Chris: My older brother is going to marry th...
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Line 12, column 25, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Inc&apos
... Gleb Iundt General manager 'Y.Inc'
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, second, so, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 898.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55837563452 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69816890449 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.690355329949 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.134543449 44.8134815571 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.0769230769 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1538461538 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.23076923077 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0935558892983 0.216113520407 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0277071124367 0.0766984524023 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0315788449271 0.0603063233224 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0345570518084 0.12726935374 27% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0226673603321 0.0580467560999 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.