You stayed at a hotel last week.After you got home you realized that you had left your watch behind. Write a letter to the hotel manager, and explain what happened. Describe the watch, and ask them to help you find it.
Keylaz:
Dear sir,
I recently logded at your hotel and i stayed in room number 20. Unfortunately, i forgot my watch in the hotel room which i believe i left on top of the bed.
Let me explain my situation in detail, on that fateful day, i received a distress call from my office line so in had to hurriedly packaged my luggage in my bag and left. Therefore, i forget the watch in thr process.
The watch is a swiss brand which has a chateruse coloured strap and metal buckle. Furthermore,it has a chronograph.
Could you kindly help me find the watch. If found, please kindly give to the receptionist so that when i come back for the conference i will pick it up from her.
Thanks for your consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Ade hki
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... I recently logded at your hotel and i stayed in room number 20. Unfortunately...
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...tayed in room number 20. Unfortunately, i forgot my watch in the hotel room which...
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...watch in the hotel room which i believe i left on top of the bed. Let me expl...
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...tuation in detail, on that fateful day, i received a distress call from my office...
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...your consideration. Yours faithfully, Ade hki
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 621.0 937.175257732 66% => OK
No of words: 135.0 206.0 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.4086580994 3.78020617076 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80968343193 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 127.690721649 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.681481481481 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 180.9 290.88556701 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.9027334001 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.1 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213206130922 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797460436088 0.0766984524023 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0849456575276 0.0603063233224 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0921095387682 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.051111959672 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.