The diagrams below show the site of a school in 2004 and the plan for changes to the school site in 2024.

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...icts the site of school in two different years 2004 and 2024 In the year 200...
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...ol in two different years 2004 and 2024 In the year 2004,there were two school ...
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... In the year 2004,there were two school buildings to accommodate 600 pupils.on...
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...ar 2004,there were two school buildings to accommodate 600 pupils.one car park ...
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...re two school buildings to accommodate 600 pupils.one car park was outside the ...
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...he main entrance and a path ran straight from main entrance to sports field. ...
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... a path ran straight from main entrance to sports field. However in the ye...
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...t from main entrance to sports field. However in the year 2024 ,there will b...
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Suggestion: However,
...om main entrance to sports field. However in the year 2024 ,there will be some ...
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... entrance to sports field. However in the year 2024 ,there will be some ch...
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... sports field. However in the year 2024 ,there will be some changes in the ...
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...s field. However in the year 2024 ,there will be some changes in the layout...
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...out. Firstly, to accommodate 1000 pupils ,third school building will be laid out i...
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...ding will be laid out in place of sports field. behind that there will be car par...
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... be laid out in place of sports field. behind that there will be car park 2 which wil...
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...rectly linked to main road by new road. building one and building two will also be conn...
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...inked to main road by new road. building one and building two will also be connec...
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...nd building two will also be connected. new sports field will be on the one side o...
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...building two will also be connected. new sports field will be on the one side of ...
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...ll be on the one side of new road behind schoolthe building three. All in al...
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... road behind schoolthe building three. All in all ,there will be lot changes in...
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...choolthe building three. All in all ,there will be lot changes in the design ...
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...,there will be lot changes in the design of school according to need of an hour ...
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...anges in the design of school according to need of an hour
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... of school according to need of an hour
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, so, third

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 636.0 965.302439024 66% => OK
No of words: 139.0 196.424390244 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57553956835 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.43363162301 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28308193524 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 76.0 106.607317073 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546762589928 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 171.0 283.868780488 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 68.9542883188 43.030603864 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8571428571 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 5.23603664747 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 1.69756097561 1473% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148190727169 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679798289945 0.103423049105 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693061089908 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127340378322 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0882508939756 0.0819641961636 108% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 86.03 61.2550243902 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.28 8.06136585366 78% => OK
difficult_words: 15.0 40.7170731707 37% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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