Write about the following topic:
Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
It is true that computers have played a pivotal role in our lives nowadays. many people claim these devices are of paramount importance, but I would argue that there are other technological innovations which are also as crucial as computers.
It is undeniable that computers have brought enormous benefits in several areas of life. In terms of education, they make teaching and studying much easier than that was in the past. it is more comfortable to create documents these days by using software like Microsoft Word. Moreover, utilizing computers with Internet helps studying from home is now possible for those whose house is far away from school. Finally, computers have an immense storage capacity; therefore, a large amount of resource is preserved significantly for saving purposes.
On the other hand, there are other inventions playing their own indispensable parts in other fields. The first one which is worth mentioning is modern medical technology which helps treatments for diseases such as heart-related problems, cancers, and other serious health problems can be applicable and possible to be implemented. For instance, CT scanner and MRI system are used for searching for ailments quickly and safely without cutting open body. What is more, the credit card is also impressive innovation which allows us do the payment when bringing no cash. Last but not least, smartphones are considered to be a substitute for the computers' function when it comes to communication and assigned work.
In conclusion, it seems to me that computers do wonders for many areas of lives; however, I believe that there are other modern innovations that have helped our lives become better every day.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 77, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Many
...d a pivotal role in our lives nowadays. many people claim these devices are of param...
^^^^
Line 4, column 184, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
... much easier than that was in the past. it is more comfortable to create documents...
^^
Line 4, column 327, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to study' or 'study'.
Suggestion: to study; study
...utilizing computers with Internet helps studying from home is now possible for those who...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, such as, it is true, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28308823529 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80375418352 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650735294118 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8026985822 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.538461538 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2307692308 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129658879392 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0426851580793 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0308925699804 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0704064011737 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277473124874 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.