People are surrounded by all kinds of advertising. They both have important and negative influences to our lives. Agree or Disagree?
In today’s material world, we are inundated with various forms of advertising. Many people hold the belief that this can have both positive and negative impacts on people’s lives. From my perspective, I completely agree with this view for several reasons.
The first argument given to support my opinion is that the purpose of advertisement is to bridge the gap between manufactures and consumers. In other words, this help disseminate information about products’ features and benefits. As a result, this would assist a person in making a purchase, saving both time and potentially, money from overspending. Informative health advertisements, for example, which include safety assessment and research, can show the positive and negative side effects of the functional foods to the patients and accordingly help them to choose the products that suit their own needs and prevent possible risks.
Another rationale behind my belief is the fact that being bombarded with advertisements manipulates the general public’s choice and spending habit. It is common that businesses try to use promotional tools to exaggerate the benefits of their services. Much worse is the fact that unwary consumers who are swayed by misleading advertisements could end up being deceived by the advertisers into impulsively buying low-quality merchandise that later disappoint them. For example, with the endorsement from the celebrities, cosmetic brands can lead customers to believe in the effectiveness of the items. When consumers receive their orders, they are disappointed because their appearance do not experience the same improvement as advertised.
In conclusion, although advertisement can introduce many benefits to its audience, I still think that the oversaturation of advertisement can bring negative impacts on individuals and society as a whole.
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| 2019-05-18 | Vo Phan Minh Hieu | 84 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, so, still, for example, in conclusion, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1591.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.72302158273 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29770589008 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643884892086 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.2140173994 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.384615385 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3846153846 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0978053816121 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0347434774005 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636438875013 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0662102581398 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0736255384198 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.9 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.