University should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. Do you agree or disagree?
A question coming up is that should university accept to equal numbers of male and female in every subject. From a personal viewpoint I particularly agree that university should balance the gender in every subject. This writing will first demonstrate university ought to equal the subject for both male and female then provide an argument about why university should not balance the subject.
Admittedly university should have the balance in every subject for both men and women. In other words, this may regarded as every single people has there personality, so they deserve to demand for their favorite subject. Perhaps one typical reason why that argument remains valid is passion is a key factor influencing to attitudes and success in everything. More importantly, a considerable factor that could justify is studying in correctly ability plays an important roles in result of that progress. Furthermore, being able to learn what we love stimulate the development of skills. All thing considered university should make change for student to exposed their passion by equal the subject for both male and female.
Besides, university have the right to keep some subject for only male or female. To some extent, that could be understood as male studies well in some subject like physical education, physics, so on and female has advantages about drawing or music too, so university could spend opportunities for who deserves more. The majority would support this because spirit and physic of each gender benefit considerably to their occupation. Others, however, give a skeptical view for the face that sex effective significantly to result. Given these points, the whole idea is university should not equal the subject for male and female.
In conclusion, I state my view that equal numbers of male and female students in every subject makes outstanding contribution to development of human resources in future. Taking a broader speculation of the matter, the result also lies in how people from various background and ages might interpret it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: role
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Suggestion: in the future
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, then, well, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1731.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27743902439 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75407160321 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55487804878 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5106295033 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.1875 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4375 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.395259012088 0.244688304435 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144362359277 0.084324248473 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.148115787592 0.0667982634062 222% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.26231113703 0.151304729494 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133248107128 0.056905535591 234% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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