Some believe that it is wrong to keep animals in zoos while others think that zoos are important for education and conservation. Discuss both and give opinion.
Traditionally, zoos were designed to entertain; however, the purpose has been changing and the future of it will be in a state of flux. Some people consider zoos as the captivity where inhuman activities are carried out while others promote their beneficial effects on education and conservation of animals. This essay will not only outline both perspectives but also reveal the importance of zoos.
As a matter of the fact, zoos where animals compromise their freedom and being victims of cruel behaviour. Indeed, many raise concern over animal rights although the impression of zoos are changing by legislating laws which offers sufficient area of enclosure rather than cages, sufficient food, and medical facilities. In Australia, every zoo has to follow rules and regulation in order to pursue the business., hence the rate of inhuman activities is dwindling.
With this change, the zoos became more advanced and professional because they hired highly-skilled staff and run activities which supplement our knowledge on a ramification of human invasion in forests such as, many species are under a list of endangered species. In fact, by running programs like adoption missions and the shows which are not only entertaining but also informative as it focus on the current scenario of a decimated forest and its impacts. This is how they encourage and aware us about the significance of their existance.
Overall, it is clear that, even though captivities are compromising with animals’ freedom, they have protective approaches such as protection, awareness, and health treatment. Therefore, the zoos are the better way to protect them and let public aware of animals’ crucial role in the ecosystem.
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...on of human invasion in forests such as, many species are under a list of endange...
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...entertaining but also informative as it focus on the current scenario of a decimated ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, therefore, while, as to, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38148148148 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99113688467 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644444444444 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.032346281 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.090909091 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5454545455 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.90909090909 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189911643257 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671869003981 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509185910747 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109261368437 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0631260625264 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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