You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.
Which viewpoint do you agree with?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
Whether it is on TV for internet we daily come across various commercials . some people say that adverts attract the customer to purchase the product in quantity .however , some people believe that these commercials are essential to improve our lives . this essay intends to analyse both perspectives full stop I believe that adverts encourage people to buy the products and moreover they provide us good quality products with advancements
On one hand , people are lured by adverts . people often purchase products that are useless for them firstly commercial offer more quantity in less amount of money . As we can't overlook the price inflation that occurred during last 10 years because of that everyone want to get more in less amount of money
On the other hand, these advertisements are very crucial as through this we come across new products with more facilities and new features for instance recently my brother bought new shirts for him in just one thousand rupees .they were very good quality and were very comfortable to wear
In a nutshell adverts do propel people to purchase the product but we can't overlook the way these advertisements improve our lives by providing us with better facility products
new facilities
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, look, moreover, so, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1032.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 202.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10891089109 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62575714637 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 176.041082164 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584158415842 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.2975951904 197% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 198.951652418 49.4020404114 403% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 206.4 106.682146367 193% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.4 20.7667163134 195% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.2 7.06120827912 229% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197673429075 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.095395002847 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545744778849 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125919660158 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0601181537424 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.8 13.0946893788 174% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.88 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.3001002004 167% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.25 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.1190380762 178% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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