Climate change is a big environmental problem that has become critical in last couple of decades. Some people claim that humans should stop burning fossil fuels and use only alternative energy resources, such as wind and solar power. Others say that oil, gas and coal are essential for many industries, and not using them will lead to economic collapse.
What is your opinion?
Support your point of view with relevant examples
Global warming is one of the major issues faced by many countries around the globe during past few decades. This climate change does not have its adverse effects only on humans but also on other ecological systems as well. Some people believe that excess usage of natural resources instead of non-renewable resources would help us resolve this problem while other believe that usage of fossil fuel is essential for the economic growth. In my opinion, we should mitigate the use of fossil fuels to save our environment.
To begin with, I believe that every single initiative would contribute a lot towards this noble cause of saving the environment. If we all reduce the use of fossil fuel and rely mainly on renewable resources, this would benefit the eco system. For instance, American company manufactures school buses and city buses that depends solely on electricity, all electric vehicles can save up to twenty gallons of fuel on daily basis, this could reduce air pollution upto 80% in most of the cities. Also, these alternative sources of energy like wind, sun are not only economical but also they do not contribute to the destruction of environment.
However, some people thinks that evading the use of fossil fuel would hamper the economic growth. For example, many East Asian countries survive due to trade of oil and fuel. If the usage of these fuels is restricted, it would affect the trade system among different nations. But these days, keeping the environment safe and clean is the highest priority or a bigger concern for most of the nations. It has become a necessity to safeguard the environment so that the upcoming generations could also benefit out of it.
In conclusion, Climate change is a critical issue being faced by most of the countries. It is high time to raise awareness and mitigate the destruction. I believe that people should be encouraged to use alternative energy sources instead of fossil fuels as this is the easiest way to improve the environment and save our motherland.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1685.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97050147493 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63418690749 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551622418879 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2945066752 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.3125 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1875 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9375 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246251262335 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765725526076 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584139261709 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150105446239 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044353109165 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.