Write a letter to a college principal, where you attended a one-day computer course and are unhappy about the way it was conducted. Explain:
what was the type of the course
what happened and what can be done to make sure this problem never occurs again.
Dear sir,
I am Harry, Recently I and my friends attended one-day course at your newly established branch of the college located at providence. I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction from the course.
Like all of my friends, I was really excited for the course. We were astonished to see huge number of students who arrived to attend that course. Unfortunately, I was really disappointed by the arrangements. To start with, there were not enough seating arrangements, however we decided to attend the lecture standing. The voice of lecturer was really low; hence she was not audible to back benchers. More importantly, there were not enough computers for students to practice what they learned. Moreover, in this hot weather, there was not even water arrangements. As we forgot to bring water bottle we were thirsty all the time.
I request you to make groups of student instead of one batch for all the students. This would solve the seating issues and all the students would listen the lecture suitably and there would be appropriate resources for each student. This way learners could benefit more from the course.
I hope you consider our problems seriously and implement the aforementioned suggestions to improve the situation.
Yours sincerely
Harry.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 564, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... there was not even water arrangements. As we forgot to bring water bottle we were...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, moreover, really, so, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1073.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13397129187 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88127281231 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602870813397 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.5016238911 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.5333333333 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9333333333 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 4.34317383033 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190923918156 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597261953625 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0341770683606 0.0603063233224 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0985905680137 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03141168242 0.0580467560999 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 70.7449484536 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.88 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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