Many people think that money to be important for achieving happiness. What importance does money have regarding happiness? Give your answer with relevant examples.
Money is considered an important factor in our lives. It is an essential part of human’s survival but we must analyse whether it is really important for happiness. This essay will discuss why money is considered important for happiness and why do people think that way.
Firstly, the utmost requirements for humans to survive is food and shelter. These basic elements have to be purchased and people work hard to meet this demand. In today’s world it is difficult to survive for even a single day without money. For example, to prepare even a single meal, we would need to purchase some groceries, vegetables, meat etc. without which we will not be able to do it. Once all the basic requirements are met, one can lead a decent life.
Secondly, if we want to try many new things around us, such as travelling to a tourist place or having a meal at a restaurant we would need more money and only then can experience those benefits. With all the changes happening around us, money becomes an integral part in our lives be it . But we need to be cautioned on the usage of it. The same money can also be used for wrong purposes such as gambling, buying drugs etc., which will not only make one lose their money but also cause a havoc in their lives. this will ultimately spoil all the happiness that one needs in their lives.
Further the same money will be of no use when a person dies. While it can buy the best treatment and medicines, it cannot guarantee recovery. also, money cannot buy friends or closed ones and thus the happiness of being surrounded by them.
To conclude, while money can enable the benefit of experiencing many things available to us, it cannot bring the ultimate happiness that one seeks for. Hence one needs to bear in mind the usage of money.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, really, second, secondly, so, then, thus, while, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59247648903 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47454028243 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.6992210343 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.1052631579 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7894736842 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63157894737 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279139390953 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877282925192 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598208800951 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164498679853 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619746259967 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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