Nowadays young people know less about traditions and culture than in the past. What are the reasons for it? Is this a positive development or a negative development?
Some Currently youngsters are not enough familiar of traditions and culture as compare to past, while I believe that it is a negative sign of any country where people has left their ancient and valuable culture owing to different reasons.
To begin with, I would like to outline the several disadvantages of less care about traditions and culture which is the most worthy and important thing of any country that demonstrates the unity of country as well. Moreover, in multiple countries people do not celebrate their cultural day owing less interest and busy life schedule which does not allow them to enjoy or celebrate, instead of enjoying they prefer to do rest at home due to heavy and extra work load. Along with this, it has seen many times in different countries that people are working on their holiday’s spite of enjoying that day. Many adepts assert that due to tradition and culture, people know the country around the globe that eventually is the positive sign for the country. Apart from this, one of the adverse consequences of being strange of culture is that future generation could be effected to some extent.
Furthermore, in different countries people do not have enough time to look these days but, on the other hand, mostly people are enjoying with their friends and families, notwithstanding, busy life schedule. In these days, approximately youngsters prefer to do other activities instead of spend time with traditions for instance, excessive usage of gadgets, spend more and more time at home due to hard work and many others which shows that people have got tired with traditions, because, world is moving rapidly towards the technology and every single person has been grabbed by its web.
In conclusion, in order to stream line the situation of these things people need to do work on it, as well as it must be transfer to the new generation that eventually will be a pride for the country. Hence, people should uphold their ancient thing to prove their culture to the world.
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| 2019-05-28 | Muhammad Waleed Khan | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 287, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng to prove their culture to the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, look, moreover, so, well, while, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 3.15609756098 412% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 29.0 5.60731707317 517% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 33.7804878049 154% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1679.0 965.302439024 174% => OK
No of words: 340.0 196.424390244 173% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93823529412 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 3.73543355544 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59490284235 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 106.607317073 171% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535294117647 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 283.868780488 183% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 3.36585365854 297% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 34.0 22.4926829268 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.9580015136 43.030603864 181% => OK
Chars per sentence: 167.9 112.824112599 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.0 22.9334400587 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.7 5.23603664747 281% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176695332136 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794860711979 0.103423049105 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419345987912 0.0843802449381 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112707158681 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047350349696 0.0819641961636 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.2329268293 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 61.2550243902 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.3012195122 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 40.7170731707 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.4329268293 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.9970731707 142% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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