As people rely more and more on technology, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
As technology advances and becomes more integrated into our daily lives, the amount people who rely on technology increases. it is believed that users are depending too much on technology to solve problems and as a result, the ability to think individually will decrease. I disagree with this statement, because technology fosters growth, promotes communication, and it encourages creation.
First, as a student, the technology proves to be a powerful resource. these resources available in the form of notes, textbooks PDFs, PowerPoints, and even online classes. By having the internet at the tip of the fingers, a student is able to research any questions they may have. The opportunity allows them to further their knowledge beyond what is taught verbally in the classroom. By exploring these pieces of information, students can apply the knowledge more effectively in the future without needing to do any prior research.
Secondly, technology provides a means of communication. Cellular phones, tablets, and computers all have messages or oral functions. these functions allow people to connect and share their knowledge. For instance, we wouldn't know how to create fire unless our ancestors continued to share and pass on that knowledge.
Lastly, technology encourages the creative growth of an individual and our future as a whole. As technology continues to develop, we provide the opportunity for students to pursue a career in computer science, engineering, etc. Through these fields of study, we are able to build more to create a more efficient way of living. All of the material that is available on the internet has been created by humans, the technology is not creating and publishing the information. Therefore, by accessing the material, people's ability to think will not deteriorate but instead become stronger.
To conclude, the belief that our ability to think will deteriorate as a result of an increase in technology is invalid. technology provides many resources that promote problem solving not only for a current issue but also for future applications. Furthermore, it encourages people to share what they know and it supports the further advancement of our young adults to create even better technology.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...eople who rely on technology increases. it is believed that users are depending to...
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...gy increases. it is believed that users are depending too much on technology to solve problem...
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...ology proves to be a powerful resource. these resources available in the form of note...
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...eteriorate but instead become stronger. To conclude, the belief that our ability...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1889.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 352.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36647727273 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01356989291 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 215.323595506 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 598.5 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.4150962063 60.3974514979 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.45 118.986275619 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 23.4991977007 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 5.21951772744 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192304067257 0.243740707755 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0529653313964 0.0831039109588 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606908048843 0.0758088955206 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109545291601 0.150359130593 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590423380078 0.0667264976115 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 14.1392134831 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 12.1639044944 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 100.480337079 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.