You saw a brochure for a one-week walking tour in the mountains. You're very interested in taking part, but you're not very fit and are worried you wouldn't be able to keep up. Write to the tour operator. In your letter:
• Explain why you're interested in the tour.
• Ask for information about dates and prices.
• Express your concerns about your fitness level.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I love the videos you post on social media of your hiking trips monthly. Recently I came across a brochure for your one-week walking tour in Himalayas and I am interested to know more about it as I have always wanted to climb the top of the mountain range and enjoy the mesmerising view.
Moreover, this is the time of the year when the hill tops are covered with snow and the region is filled with cherry blossom trees. However, I am not able to exercise regularly which makes me doubt about my strengths and stamina for going on this tour. Hence, it would be really helpful if you could inform me about any physical training I need to undergo for this tour.
Another aspect that concerns me is the cost and date of intended travel as it is not mentioned on the brochure I reviewed. Therefore, I would be grateful to you in you could provide me with the price and dates of trave. This can help me plan my trip in advance and I will have enough time to request for one week holidays from work too.
Yours sincerely
Captain America
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 204, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... you could provide me with the price and dates of trave. This can help me plan my...
^^
Line 8, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... too. Yours sincerely Captain America
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, moreover, really, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 865.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4358974359 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26973918685 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635897435897 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.7511638582 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1111111111 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 16.8248392259 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 4.34317383033 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215875047984 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0846237372436 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662420503385 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14962340095 0.12726935374 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296158900725 0.0580467560999 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.