We are becoming increasingly dependent on computers. They are used in business, hospitals, crime detection and even to fly planes. What things will they be used in the future? Is this dependence on computers a good thing or should we be more suspicious of their benefits?
In the modern era, using a computer is become essential for us and are used by several fields of medicine, investigation of crime, education and aerospace engineering in very high demand. The usage of computers will increase in the future and will have a positive effect on our society.
Firstly, with the invention of Computer, teachers would be able to conduct classes in different locations at the same time and this way they can save money which they usually spend on travelling. Secondly, there will be a huge change in the traffic control system as traffic control both in highways and air would be fully automated and any violation of traffic rules would be detected easily and fined instantly. Thirdly, computers have made life easier and giving opportunities to women to work from home and this way they can take care of their families as well.
The dependency of computers can bring serious issues in our life. Firstly, if we completely depend on computer programs and if there is an error within the program which can affect a lot of human lives and can create chaos. Secondly, human workers and employees will be replaced by the machines which lead to an increase in unemployment which is intrinsically increased the rate of crime.
In conclusion, computers are more important for the modern era as it will enhance our quality of life. However, it is a double-edged blade which must be used more cautiously. The absolute dependence of computers is more dangerous.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1237.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.948 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73502029243 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2845274213 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.454545455 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7272727273 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.81818181818 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307745340284 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111161958631 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0286632663199 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17351145131 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0175103382746 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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