A company has asked your local council to open a factory in the area where you live. You and your neighbors feel that this is not a great idea. write a letter to the local council.
In your letter, you should:
state what problems this might cause
explain how it will affect you and others
suggest what you want the council to do.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I writing to express my disagreement on the decision of opening a factory in the area where I live. In fact this decision has been opposed by many people of the locality.
I am the resident of Mohali Phase 1, which is very old residential area of the city. It is not a good idea to start a factory in the residential area as it will cause many problems like noise pollution, air pollution and will effects water resources.
The air of the surrounding will undoubtedly become toxic. As many children and old age people live's in the surrounding, it will have negative impact on their health. Moreover the traffic will increase, which may lead to accidents as children commute to the school on the bicycle's.
It will be better to start the factory outside the city area that is in the outskirts of the town where lot of free space is readily available. Moreover, their will be no disturbance if factory will operate in outer area .
I hope you will the problems that might cause and tackle the issue ina responsible manner.
Yours faithfully,
Maninder kaur
- Some people believe that children should be given lessons on how to manage money in school? Do you agree or disagree? 78
- Some people believe that children should be given lessons on how to manage money in school? Do you agree or disagree? 11
- Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish Why do you think this is happening What can government do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced 92
- Wedding are bigger and more expensive in many others at present than in the past. Why is this the case? Is it a positive or negative development? 56
- A company has asked your local council to open a factory in the area where you live You and your neighbors feel that this is not a great idea write a letter to the local council In your letter you should state what problems this might cause explain how it 92
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
Dear Sir/Madam, I writing to express my disagreement on t...
^
Line 5, column 227, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'effect'
Suggestion: effect
...noise pollution, air pollution and will effects water resources. The air of the surr...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 167, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...l have negative impact on their health. Moreover the traffic will increase, which may le...
^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 221, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ce if factory will operate in outer area . I hope you will the problems that mi...
^^
Line 14, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ner. Yours faithfully, Maninder kaur
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, moreover, so, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 901.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7671957672 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66101952844 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582010582011 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 285.3 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5508815509 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.9090909091 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1818181818 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72727272727 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14445959385 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0563526419236 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452276544452 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.078586169862 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463606460427 0.0580467560999 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.