some people claim that there are more disadvantages to the car than its advantages. Do you agree or disagree? Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of having a car.
In our lives, we travel from one place to another for a great variety of reasons and while travelling we greatly depend on cars, whether it is a private car or a public bus. The number of car owners is increasing every day because every person expects the freedom to travel and comfort while traveling. I m not completely agree with the idea that car has more drawbacks than benefits. However, owning a car have many strengths and shortcomings.
The main advance of owning a car per personal perspective is it gives travelling freedom. For an example, with a private car, people can plan their own journey, go somewhere whenever they want, take diversions to avoid bad traffic, avoid long queue for ticketing and enjoy the utmost flexibility and privacy of a soothing journey car ownership can be helpful in emergency cases. For an illustration, when someone gets sick, his family members can easily take him to a hospital regardless of time. Finally owning a private car offers someone the freedom to enjoy his time during the journey while it is quite impossible on public transport.
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Suggestion: Finally,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 903.0 1615.20841683 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 186.0 315.596192385 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85483870968 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65976930576 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.655913978495 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 506.74238477 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.4439582172 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.875 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.375 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159853919343 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0840174646583 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638739307413 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130655038842 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400974422685 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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