Some believe that sports are key element in our society, while others argue that it is just a recreational activity to be done in one's free time. Discuss both views and give your opinions.
People from some countries give more importance to sports. They start their career in sport and become successful professional player. But some of them think that sport is the only leisure activity. Both the parties are right with their stands. Allow me to elaborate the views and opinion.
Although sports are widely expanding nowadays. People are keen to play games like cricket, football, basket ball etc. Sport activity is lead to fit the physics of body and also it gives mental peace to body. Countryside people prefer to play basket ball and football daily and they are more physically fit that urban people. There are some games in which people started their career easily and they become successful player. Even though schools are trained to their students by arranging special sport lecture to motivate the students and get inspire towards sports. Parents enroll their kids in to sports complex for outdoor games and indoor games.
In the past, people thought that there are no more career in sport for their kids. Parents could not see bright future of child in sports and they gave more importance in child education. People believe that their child become engineer, doctor etc. rather than being sport player.
Looking to the present scenario, Sports become tremendously growing. Parents encourage their children for making career in sports. As a matter of fact, there are good example of successful sport players in our society. So rather considering sport as a recreational activity, it would become successful story in career for some one.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, so, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1310.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13725490196 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3186587487 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549019607843 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.1777022575 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 65.5 106.682146367 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.75 20.7667163134 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 7.06120827912 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142760887085 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0500707782059 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0366993840446 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0994596197661 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274673598731 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 50.2224549098 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.64 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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