The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Great achievements are born out of collective effort. An integral component of any collective effort is the camaraderie between individuals that make up the team. Although, there is a formally assigned leader, I would like to think that everyone in the team is a leader, because each individual owns up to the task that is assigned to them and execute it to the best of their capabilities. This inherent quality of leadership is moulded over time and the society plays a vital role in nurturing it. In my opinion, a society that instills a sense of cooperation over mutual competition in its population of young people has better prospect in terms of candidates for leadership roles in government, industry or other fields.
My reasons for making this claim are twofold. Firstly, excess competition can lead to hostility and distrust among peers. For instance, when you are directly competing with a person, say for an exam, you tend to hoard key information to yourself and not share with others. But, sharing information can actually be of benefit to all the parties since each person will have something unique to offer and each can take home a learning that weren't aware of before, thereby improving the chances of doing better in the exam.
Secondly, when you are working in projects, you work in teams. And, when working in a team or working across teams, differences in opinion are bound to happen. In such scenarios, having the skills to cooperate by listening to the viewpoints of all the involved entities and arriving at a solution that is sensible and equitable will result in a quicker and faster execution of the project.
Although a small amount of competition is healthy in helping pushing the boundaries of each individual to arrive at a better end product, the advantages provided by working with cooperation overweighs this advantage. In conclusion, a sense of cooperation goes a long way in achieving the objectives of a project in a work environment.
- The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree with the cl 50
- The following is taken from a memo from the advertising director of the Super Screen Movie Production Company.“According to a recent report from our marketing department, during the past year, fewer people attended Super Screen-produced movies than in a 23
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 438, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: weren't
... and each can take home a learning that werent aware of before, thereby improving the ...
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Line 7, column 62, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to push' or 'push'.
Suggestion: to push; push
...nt of competition is healthy in helping pushing the boundaries of each individual to ar...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1649.0 2235.4752809 74% => OK
No of words: 332.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96686746988 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87877914348 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578313253012 0.4932671777 117% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 704.065955056 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.1634006483 60.3974514979 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.785714286 118.986275619 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7142857143 23.4991977007 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 5.21951772744 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181723980408 0.243740707755 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0564905874893 0.0831039109588 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735438980045 0.0758088955206 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0912875953233 0.150359130593 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490547818935 0.0667264976115 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 100.480337079 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.