Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
There is always hot debate of music influencing different people of several ages and it’s cultures. I firmly believe that music has power to bring the people closer as well as distant. I will be discussing the potentials of music in harmony and love in next paragraphs.
In this globalized era, where the musics of one country is played in many parts of world. It is an effective way of bonding with people of various cultures and promote togetherness. For instance many political diplomats when visits to fellow country, the host country always plays the music of home country of diplomats, this shows the strong relations between countries as well as an understanding between them in addition to that some types of foreign music also have therapeutic values.
The music also have several effects on different levels of ages. When you listen an old music was playing by young generation suddenly you deep dive in the world of your nostalgia and you instantly connect with those youngsters. For an example my grandfather and father are big fans of Kishore Kumar , in their leisure time they jointly plays and dance on his music and enjoys the moment.
In my opinion, there are insurmountable advantages of music in our lives such as for entertainment, to create bonding with different people as well as their cultures.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, as for, for instance, in addition, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1111.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 223.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98206278027 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71128461321 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600896860987 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 344.7 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.5101452341 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.1 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.9 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269375038447 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112229884041 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630625151742 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164166278163 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363929650706 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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