you are studying a short course in another country. your accommodation was arranged by the course provider. there is a major problem with the accommodation.
write a letter to the course provider. In your letter ,
say what is the problem
describe the accommodation you thought you were getting
ask the provider to solve the problem.
Dear Sir,
My name is Ann, enrolled for project management course at your university. I am writing this letter to request you to resolve my problem with the accommodation you have arranged to me at university residence building.
I have been provided a shared accommodation with three other room mates who are first year students. Unfortunately, my roommates prefer to have late night parties and loud music in the room. Due to this I am unable to concentrate on my studies.
I prefer to stay in calm and peaceful surroundings and I expected that I may get room with one of my classmates. However I am now forced to stay in a room with junior students who are not at all serious about their studies.
I want to complete this course on time. So I want you to solve my problem regarding the accommodation by either allotting me another room or change my shared accommodation to single occupancy. I am willing to pay any additional cost incurred for this.
I hope you will understand the gravity of the issue and will take suitable action. Awaiting to hear from you.
Yours faithfully,
Ann Johns
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 22, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'shared accommodation'.
Suggestion: shared accommodation
...ence building. I have been provided a shared accommodation with three other room mates who are fir...
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Line 7, column 114, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...may get room with one of my classmates. However I am now forced to stay in a room with ...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 225, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...not at all serious about their studies. I want to complete this course on time. ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 14, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...om you. Yours faithfully, Ann Johns
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, may, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 920.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76683937824 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89620157621 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621761658031 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1141554909 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.7692307692 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8461538462 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.61538461538 4.34317383033 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191409196805 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643717633833 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059841453954 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.099914107519 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0838057066679 0.0580467560999 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.79 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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