technology
Nowadays, inventions on novel technologies are increasing rapidly and computers as a form of automated discoveries are starting to replace human in workplace. From my point of view, jobs that will be replaced by these machines are those which do not involve analytical and critical thinking and this issue will definitely impact the society.
Understanding how computers work, they operate as per commands from human through some sets of logic called algorithm. People utilize this technology in order to eliminate repetitive jobs that merely follow certain patterns, or in the other word, efficiency. In manufacturing company for example, some employees used to work in carriage section to transport items and packaging section to wrap products with default arrangement, but now machines take over their role to do this job. This is not only efficient in terms of cost that the company invests to the workers, but also increasing the accuracy of process due to human-error elimination.
However, the advantages of this technologies also come with the disadvantages. Many countries are currently facing this massive problem: unemployment, since more and more people lost their job due to automation. This issue is getting even worse where the education level of certain nations is still low and cannot keep up with ever-growing technology. Furthermore, this unemployment also leads to numerous social problems in our society, such as increasing rate of homeless and criminals. When people stops earning money, their ability to pay bills and rents also stops. As a result, some of them become homeless, and the others might try a shortcut- being criminals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 28, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...limination. However, the advantages of this technologies also come with the disadva...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, so, still, for example, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1399.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3601532567 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91930389929 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659003831418 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8786353271 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.583333333 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114167550774 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0533426865976 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0938430905379 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0841847859245 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0197423575784 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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