You have a pen friend living abroad. He is interested to learn about the major news items in your country.
Briefly describe any piece of news that is being broadcast on TV and reasons why you are interested to share this news with him.
in your letter
- Say how you feel when you receive the letter
- Mention why the incident in question is important for you and your countrymen
- Give regards to her parents
Hello John,
Thank you for showing interest in my nation. I am glad that you are fascinated by my territory and want to know about current affairs. When I received your letter, I was delighted to know your curiosity about my motherland. I feel proud whenever someone shows interest in my state.
There are many news headlines are broadcasted but I would like to share key bulletin with you. In my territory, the Prime Minister, Narender Modi won the general elections and elected as second-term Prime Minister in a row.
I am excited to share this news, because electing a leader is vital for any territory. I personally supported him as a foremost leader of my motherland.
It is important to every countryman, who is going to be my nation's law maker. The Prime Minister of any nation is responsible for his country's development and financial growth. He is the international spoke for my motherland, who represents a piece of land globally.
By the way, how are your parents doing? I hope, they are doing well. Please give my wishes to your parents. I pray for them, to be fit and healthy.
Thank you again for showing interest in my country.
Best Wishes,
Puneet
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, second, so, well, i feel, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 986.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83333333333 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77475229315 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627450980392 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.5346872018 44.8134815571 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.0 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.0 16.8248392259 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.41176470588 4.34317383033 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 7.41237113402 202% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220818644934 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690503212131 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611600822333 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114834291476 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395125125136 0.0580467560999 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.85 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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