You have seen an advertisement for a community college that needs teachers for night classes.
Write a letter to the community college. In your letter:
• say which advertisement you are answering
• describe which course(s) you want to teach, and what it/they would be about
• explain why you would be a suitable teacher
Dear Sir/Madam,
Today I have seen the poster you have distributed in our area and I am writing in respond of that circular for the teachers you require for Adamji community college.
As you are looking for some qualified tutor for night shift, which will run from 7 PM to 11 PM, I believe I am compatible to that. In fact, personally I feel more active working till late night which will beneficial for your requirements.
I noticed, that there are several course you need teaches for, but English is my choice which I can teach others in effective way. Even, in recent days knowing English has become indispensable for better career.
I think, I am the potential candidate you are searching for because I have completed my higher studies in English with a great score. In addition, I have few years of teaching experience in another school. I understand student’s lacking’s clearly and can make them interested in learning.
Will look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Md. Shawan Shahriar
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 27, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun course seems to be countable; consider using: 'several courses'.
Suggestion: several courses
...uirements. I noticed, that there are several course you need teaches for, but English is my...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, i feel, i think, in addition, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 869.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02312138728 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84947061327 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.687861271676 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8784328072 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.9 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 4.34317383033 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362419176235 0.216113520407 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121472068589 0.0766984524023 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0922398610887 0.0603063233224 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188888010754 0.12726935374 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0847315262034 0.0580467560999 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.