Many people support use of animals for testing medicines for humans. Others believe it isn’t appropriate to use animals for such experiments. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In today’s modern world, exploiting animals to investigate the effects of new drugs is one of the grave polemical issues. While some argue it is agreeable to use animals for this purpose, others are concerned that it is out of moral precept. This essay discusses this question from both points of view and then I will give my own opinion on the matter.
On one side of the argument there are people who believe that human being for reaching to their goal, namely finding a new drug or curing method, can exercise everything even animals. They might justify their conception in this way that if should they not use animal for testing medicines, then it will not be probably possible to remedy human illness. To illustrate, the medicine of some maladies, including tuberculosis, smallpox, chickenpox and the black death, just found through using animal as an experimental sample. Also, the advocates of these kind of deeds assert that it is only plausible and reliable way to pick up the efficacious of a medicine.
On the other hand, some people argue that it is not proper that animals become tortured and afflicted with detrimental and fatal diseases just for our aims. It is thought that via development of science, other ways will be possible to be substitute with taking advantage of animals. For instance, nowadays applying simulation is a prevailing method to foretell what happens in a process or reaction. Therefore, there might not feel the need of animal to avail ourselves of them. On top of that, the structural physiology of animals are more or less like human, then when they become deliberately ill so we test medicine on them, it will be an ostensible example of torment. As a result, it is better to be precluded this atrocious behavior toward that innocuous animal.
In my opinion, both points of view have their merits. On balance however, I tend to believe that animals should not be used as an experimental sample because it is cruel to them and because I think there should be different way to test a drug and obtain somewhat accurate results.
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also, however, if, so, then, therefore, while, for instance, i think, kind of, as a result, in my opinion, more or less, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1727.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86478873239 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67232653345 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56338028169 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5068783698 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.133333333 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2666666667 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301203345652 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0924845589245 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592365446406 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184964475973 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466873071556 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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