The line graph below gives information about the number of visitors to three London museums between June and September 2013.
The line graph shows the number of people who travel to the british museum, the natural museum, the science museum from june to september in 2013.
Overall, the number of travellers to the british museum in July was the highest. it can be seen that the people travelling to the science museum and that of natural history museum were similar. By contrast, the number of tourists to the science museum was the lowest on august.
In terms of people who visit to the british museum, starting at 600,000 in june, it increased considerably to about 750,000 in July. After that, this figure dropped significantly to 500,000 before jumping to around 650,000 in september.
Regarding the number of visitors to the natural history museum, it went down substantially from about 550,000 to around 370,000 between june and July. it saw a wildly fluctuate at about between 370,000 and 380,000 in July and august. One month later, it climbed constantly to about 480,000. it should be noticed that there was a sharp decline from 400,000 to 300,000 in june and august. By contrast, september witnessed a gradual rise.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 924.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96774193548 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51047061573 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 260.1 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.5551026837 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9090909091 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.18181818182 5.23603664747 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246897930381 0.215688989381 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104214896708 0.103423049105 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0894130017002 0.0843802449381 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173835968745 0.15604864568 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101857756346 0.0819641961636 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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