More and more wild animals are on the verge of extinction and other are on the endangered list. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem?
It is widely known that as the world grows and technology gets more developed, more and more animals are at risk of extinction and many are on the endangered list.This essay intends to discuss the causes of this phenomenon and suggest some measures to alleviate the problem.I firmly believe that humanity and people's creations are mainly what causes this and the issue can be solved.
One of the most important reasons why this happens is global warming.Animals that live in cold conditions are on the verge of extinction, because their ice habitats are getting melted. Although natural disasters can also be the reason of habitat destruction. A lot of animals die due to the increasing enormous amount of diseases which are also caused by pollution in the air and in water. Humans, hunt animals animals for various reasons. Mainly for food and clothing. Animals have a very natural and expensive fur.
There are many world organizations that are trying to keep the number of animals balanced and prevent hunting in many different locations.
The solutions to this problem are not simple. Less factories should be built in nature close to animals and their habitats to cause less pollution.And people must understand that animals are not on earth to be used as materials for clothes .
To sum up, there is no doubt that animals are a big part of nature and steps must be taken to reduce pollution, hunting and global warming . Otherwise, the problem will result in animal extinction
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- More and more wild animals are on the verge of extinction and others are on the endangered list. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem? 56
- More and more wild animals are on the verge of extinction and other are on the endangered list. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem? 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, no doubt, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1238.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9718875502 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65108834114 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578313253012 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 95.9645116697 49.4020404114 194% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.166666667 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 7.06120827912 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356797187783 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112067720342 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0898392358035 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169141199672 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111875848227 0.056905535591 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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