In some countries, it is becoming increasingly common for people to follow a vegetarian diet. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
There is no dubious that today in some communities more people are afflicted with cancer and cardiovascular diseases, and to tackle these phenomena, there are some plausible and prevailing ways. One of which is to exercise a vegetarian regime. Although this method has own specific benefits, it has some drawbacks which cause some irreparable damages.
Nowadays, using a vegetarian diet is augmenting owing to advantages which has. Firstly, this diet is naturally high in fiber, leads to declining the number of colonic maladies in people. Therefore, it tends to cause people become more wholesome also reduces person’s running expenditures. To illustrate, the research which was carried out by university of MIT reveals a diverse relationship between having fruit and vegetable every day and the possibility of suffering of cancer. Moreover, it positively effects on cardiac illness due to almost bereft of saturated fats. Thus, as to statistics, the number of people who suffers a heart attack decreases.
Despite this, it might seem there are significant advantages it can bring to people’s life. To begin, should people not have meat (whether white or red one), then it is crystal clear that they will lose main source of proteins and some essential nutrient. The paucity of them likely brings about some irreparable damage to some organs and makes their performance dysfunction. For instance, one of the super stars has cut out meat from his food basket since one year ago, recently spend two weeks in hospital owing to miss a kind of protein of red meat. On top of that, it affects our countenance and figure, so that make us leaner.
I would therefore argue that although there are advantages of using vegetarian diet, under no condition do we not have to eliminate meat from our table. It is because of its pernicious effects on body which originate from devoid of proteins and micro-nutrients of great pith and moment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, as to, for instance, kind of, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1630.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14195583596 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8461986682 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640378548896 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2253996429 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.875 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8125 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6875 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22321841886 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657881686711 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499262970569 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123507481403 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0210738781095 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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