A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
• give contact details for when you are away
• give instructions about how to care for your pet
• describe other household duties
Dear john,
I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and to the best of spirits. I am writing this letter to thank you for agreeing to home sit for me when I will be gone to New York for a week.
I am putting down a list of few priority items along with their schedule timings for you. I know you will take care of them to the most extent possible.
Firstly, feed my cat twice a day and give her a bowl of milk in the evening, just so you know all the related cat supplies are kept at the front porch. she is very friendly and I am pretty sure she is not going to disturb you much.
Also mentioning few household chores such as watering my plants daily so that they do not whither, keeping the outside light on every night for the safety reason and disposal of garbage to nearby dumpster when required. I have stocked enough ration for a week, but still if you need something specific, you can shop from nearby convenience store. Feel free to use anything at my house just as yours and I wish you a comfortable stay. do give me a call as and when you need at 111-111-1111, as I consider above a big favor.
I hope you enjoy stay at my house even in my absence. Once again thank you for your generosity.
Warm Regards
Harry
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...will be gone to New York for a week. I am putting down a list of few priority ...
^
Line 5, column 91, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ng with their schedule timings for you. I know you will take care of them to the ...
^
Line 7, column 153, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
...t supplies are kept at the front porch. she is very friendly and I am pretty sure s...
^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...he is not going to disturb you much. Also mentioning few household chores such as...
^^^^
Line 9, column 435, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Do
...ours and I wish you a comfortable stay. do give me a call as and when you need at ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, still, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1009.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 240.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.20416666667 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23494577985 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629166666667 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4423338719 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.6153846154 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4615384615 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53846153846 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285462379231 0.216113520407 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0966839000623 0.0766984524023 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627975172422 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153442499386 0.12726935374 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046870993535 0.0580467560999 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.08 8.71597938144 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.83 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.