most modern have both parents working and as a result children spend less time with their parents what are the reason for this what problems can this cause.
These day, there is an ongoing debate between people about modern culture effect on children. it should be viewed as both problem and reason. while it is possible claim that advancement in technology life has become hectic. in this essay, my point of view by analyzing both side of argument.
To embark with, there are several reason in support of what is the reason due to modern cultural that both parents are working. one of them is that due to inflation parents cannot fulfill their family need so both parents has to do work. it can also be argued that children spend less time with their parents. it should also be taken in the account that parents spend more time on work.
Those who have problem for modern cultural have a different view and say that it can actually not be a good for the children growth. firstly, it claim that it give bad effect on tender mind of the children. then there are consume that it cause problems like depression.
To conclude, while there are strong argument on both side of case. my personal opinion is that in modern cultural have both parents working and as a result children spend less time with their parents. i would strongly recommend that parents should spend time with their children for mental, physical and emotional growth
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- Some people think that having a set retirement age (e.g. 65 years) for everybody, regardless of occupation, is unfair. They believe that certain workers deserve to retire and receive a pension at an earlier age. 78
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- most modern families have both parents working and as a result children spend less time with their parents what are the reason for this what problems can this cause. 55
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, firstly, if, so, then, while, as to, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 20.9802955665 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1060.0 1207.87684729 88% => OK
No of words: 224.0 242.827586207 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73214285714 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22561545604 2.71678728327 82% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 139.433497537 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53125 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 319.5 379.143842365 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.6157635468 195% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.7870914091 50.4703680194 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.7142857143 104.977214359 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.9669160288 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07142857143 7.25397266985 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.33497536946 375% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.522983288493 0.242375264174 216% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156517989968 0.0925447433944 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116881441452 0.071462118173 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.283433010362 0.151781067708 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126257133496 0.0609392437508 207% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 12.6369458128 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 53.1260098522 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.9458128079 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 11.5310837438 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.32886699507 88% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 55.0591133005 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.5123152709 67% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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