The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for your neighbours.
Write a letter to the local council. In your letter:Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly;Explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours;Suggest what should be done about the problem
Dear sir/madam,
I am Harry martin, resident of villa delrio apartments in Greenwich Avenue. I am writing this letter to bring your concern over the faulty garbage collection system in our area.
Let me explain in detail, First of all, there is only one garbage disposal area within fifteen miles that holds the garbage of around 180 families. To make the problem worst, the garbage truck comes only once in a week consequently, the dumpster is overfull most of the times and the garbage get messed nearby. Moreover, there is a common dumpster for all types of waste as a result, the garbage truck filters the garbage there only and makes a lot of disturbing noise and sometimes block the road for a while. All these problems had badly affected our lives, children could not play freely outside due to the fear of infection or any disease caused by scattered garbage . We want our society to be clean but it could not be possible with improper garbage collection system.
On behalf of all the residents, I request you to implement some changes such as increase the frequency of garbage truck and also place separate dumpsters for renewable and non-renewable waste. Such changes will definitely solve our problem to a great extent.
I hope you consider our issues seriously and take suggestive actions as soon as possible.
Your Sincerely
Harry Martin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 671, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... any disease caused by scattered garbage . We want our society to be clean but it ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, moreover, so, while, such as, as a result, first of all, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1133.0 937.175257732 121% => OK
No of words: 230.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92608695652 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53723235474 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652173913043 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 290.88556701 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.7108937162 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 76.5299724578 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9090909091 16.8248392259 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 4.34317383033 230% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19405605176 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744389835291 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.078480801458 0.0603063233224 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0959290233947 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0786738545015 0.0580467560999 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 8.37731958763 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 70.7449484536 72% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 7.59969072165 121% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 41.2886597938 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.