The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for your neighbours.
Write a letter to the local council. In your letter:Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly;Explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours;Suggest what should be done about the problem
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to draw your attention to the problem of collection rubbish in our community. As we have special place with just two containers for our 15 houses that not enough.
The main disadvantage of existing system is the small place where these containers are. In addition, this area is too close to a road. Due to the working special machine at limited place rubbish collection is obviously not properly. As these containers overfull a lot of rubbish can be on the road. This condition not allow workers to collect all garbage around containers.
As a result, it is not the appropriate collection system. Drivers go the through dirty road and they force to park cars between rubbish.
I believe the best way to rectify the situation is replace containers to different area far away 100 metres from the road and add two more containers. It hopefully solves problem and drivers or pedestrians can go on the clean road.
I hope this matter will receive your immediate attention. Thank you in advance.
Yours faithfully,
Olga Choklia
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 234, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...h collection is obviously not properly. As these containers overfull a lot of rubb...
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Line 4, column 108, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'parking'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'force' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: parking
...o the through dirty road and they force to park cars between rubbish. I believe the b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 886.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89502762431 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69584954587 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646408839779 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.6486611897 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.2857142857 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.9285714286 16.8248392259 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.28571428571 4.34317383033 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2695080334 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0842030138562 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062964116922 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122106585915 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608143626413 0.0580467560999 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.25 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.