Some people believe it is often necessary, even desirable, for political leaders to withhold information from the public. Others believe that the public has a right to be fully informed.
Politicians play very vital role when it comes to development of the nation. People of the country lookup to the politicians with very positive persuasion. They set an example for upcoming new generations. Politician's good moves are cherished for life. Some part of information has to be transparent to the people because they've the rights to know everything. Those electorate elects them by voting in election. However, I agree that sensitive information should be hold backby leaders for betterment of the nation for following three reasons.
Firstly, in government there are some information which is very sensitive to the outer world. This information upon shared can cause negative outrage. information related to secularism can impact people's mind in different way which can lead to uproar in the community. For instance, government imposed some rules on religious place. Rules imposed on religious place can have contrary collision on people's religious beliefs. This can lead to riots disturbing community harmony.
Secondly, There are some information which are not supposed to be shared among the people. This information are confidential information for welfare of the nation. In this cases leaders do not hold any rights to share this information with any of their colleagues also. For example, On 6th November, 2016 Prime Minister of India announced demonetisation of old currency. This law was imposed to overcome many national and international issues for well-being of people of India. If such information is leaked then, the goal of this law could not be achieved.
Finally, safety of the country are ultimately in the hands of political leaders. They have the remote control in their hand which controls the nation. One wrong move from their side could be deleterious. Opponent's can misuse this information against them. For instance, first nuclear bomb testing in India was carried out in secret mission. No one except the top officials had the idea of this mission. If this information was leaked it could detriment the military and impede the progress of the mission.
In sum, vital information is a party of welfare on nation and being forthright might otherwise characterise dishonesty to the nation. In many situation being frank with the electorate has hinder the work progress. So, some information has to be preserved for good future of the nation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 323, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: they've
...to be transparent to the people because theyve the rights to know everything. Those el...
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Line 1, column 361, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this electorate' or 'Those electorates'?
Suggestion: This electorate; Those electorates
...e theyve the rights to know everything. Those electorate elects them by voting in election. Howe...
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Line 1, column 467, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'held'?
Suggestion: held
...ee that sensitive information should be hold backby leaders for betterment of the na...
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Line 3, column 23, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...three reasons. Firstly, in government there are some information which is very...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Information
...upon shared can cause negative outrage. information related to secularism can impact people...
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Line 5, column 109, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...ared among the people. This information are confidential information for welfare of...
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Line 5, column 168, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...formation for welfare of the nation. In this cases leaders do not hold any rights to...
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Line 5, column 265, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...nformation with any of their colleagues also. For example, On 6th November, 2016 Pri...
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Line 5, column 291, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'November 2016'.
Suggestion: November 2016
...ir colleagues also. For example, On 6th November, 2016 Prime Minister of India announced demon...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f welfare on nation and being forthright might otherwise characterise dishonesty ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, well, as to, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 14.8657303371 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 12.9106741573 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2007.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 380.0 442.535393258 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28157894737 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85952144263 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528947368421 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 634.5 704.065955056 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.2370786517 143% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 23.0359550562 56% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.2260460655 60.3974514979 40% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.2068965517 118.986275619 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.1034482759 23.4991977007 56% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.21951772744 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198956447593 0.243740707755 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577060646083 0.0831039109588 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470064680818 0.0758088955206 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119202386498 0.150359130593 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375522066455 0.0667264976115 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 14.1392134831 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 48.8420337079 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.46 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 100.480337079 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 11.2143820225 64% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.