Many old buildings protected by law are part of the nation's history. Some people think they should be knocked down and replaced by new ones
How important is it to maintain old buildings ?
Should history stand in the way of progress?
The law is protecting several ancient architectural structures that are associated with the history of the country. While some individuals feel these aged buildings ought to be demolished and reconstructed, I think maintaining the originality of these old houses is important for educational and tourism purposes. Although the advancement of the structures would be beneficial, the history of the nation is equally important.
Admittedly, replacing the old buildings with new ones could be advantageous. Clearly, the modern architectural designs would have advanced features that could guarantee safety. This is because the materials such as, concrete and iron which would be used for the construction of these houses would be stronger and more reliable. For instance, the majority of the new architectural structures in Lagos are flood resistant. Unlike the ancient buildings, these structures are safe from collision during heavy rainfall.
However, with regards to the old structures, there are ways the country benefits from its existence. First and foremost, the old buildings serve as tourist attractions; for example, Egypt's Pyramids attract millions of tourists yearly. In brief, as old buildings are attractive, they could generate huge revenue for a nation. Another significant way aged houses may be essential concerns education. In order to educate youth effectively about the country's heritage, it is important that the old buildings which would depict the aesthetic values are maintained. This means that old buildings facilitate education
In conclusion, despite the reliability that modern buildings could bring in terms of safety, the historic and educational value of the ancient architectural houses cannot be underestimated. In other words, the progress is important as well as the value of history.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, so, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, i think, in brief, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1560.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.71428571429 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09651446471 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564102564103 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4900691373 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28788626958 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0965793757256 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664406765448 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172061133091 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642743448229 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.84 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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