Some companies sponsor sports as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think it is good, while others think teher are disadvantages to this.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Nowadays, it has become a common trend among big companies to sponsor various sports to advertise their products. It has been considered that some people believe that this practice has adverse effects whilst, others think that it is advantageous. This essay will discuss both the aspects and throw light on my views.
There are multiple reasons which support that companies should sponsor sports as it is beneficial for both companies and sport committees. On one hand, companies can increase their sale by showcasing their products. For instance, two years ago, Coca-cola company sponsored Olympic games which helped to rose their sale by three fourth of the global population within two years. On the other hand, sport committees can award players with prizes by the money from the sponsored company. In addition to this, such sports inspired the viewers to take part in physical and outdoor activities and sometimes adopted sports as their career.
On the other side, there are some disadvantages of organising such sports. One of them is it effects the quality of sports spirit because players become money minded as a result, they start taking performance enhancing drugs to meet the expectations of sponsor company and sometimes, trapped into scandals like match fixing. To illustrate, two Australian players were banned for life long because of using drugs. Other problem is that the advertisements shown during games attract the customers and encourage them to spend money on the things which they actually don not require.
To conclude, sponsoring games by the companies has both merits and demerits but as my opinion, these disadvantages can be converted into benefits if strict rules are regulations are imposed by sport authorities as well as government.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, so, well, for instance, in addition, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27561837456 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66279680663 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593639575972 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1813577988 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.846153846 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294571793298 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102686132708 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712229020731 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176046717284 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0688166833919 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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