You are going away to travel for the summer. A friend will be looking after your house while you are away. Write a letter to your friend.
In your letter:
Say where you are going
Describe your house
Explain some of the things your friend must do to look after your house
Dear Yagnika,
Just writing this letter to say thank you to be agree to look after my house while I'm on the summer vacation and I want to give some details about my house, some important household chores and trip.
First thing is, I'm going to visit Mumbai city with my family for three days from 29th May in this summer holidays. Also, we will visit one of the UNESCO world heritage site named Elephanta island, that is one of the number of island in the Mumbai harbour.
Other thing is, my house is located in the outskirts of Ahmadabad city which is in the east of the intersection of Main road and Airport road. My house is easily identified as it is surrounded by magnificent garden and it is two storey building. When you enter in the house, modern kitchen is in the left side of main entrance and in the right side, living room is there. On the first floor, you can find three bedrooms.
What's more, I would like to make you aware about some important things. Firstly, a garbageman will come on every Tuesday and Thursday to segregate wastes. So, please be punctual in emptying the bin otherwise overflowing will occur. Secondly, maid will be there at 9 o'clock everyday to clean house. Therefore, try to stay at home at that time.
I am very thankful to you. Just let me know if you want anything else from my side.
Yours lovingly,
Kajal Desai
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-10-10 | pawanchopra000 | 73 | view |
| 2019-06-19 | kajal123 | 89 | view |
| 2019-02-24 | gracespeakss | 73 | view |
| 2019-02-18 | Richa Dhiman | 73 | view |
| 2019-01-12 | hiiphy | 73 | view |
- You recently visited a store to repair your computer but they couldn't fix it. Write a letter to the store manager and say,What was the problem with your compute?What happened in the store?What do you want them to do about it? 78
- A friend of yours recently gave you a nice birthday present Write a letter to your friend In your letter Thank her for the present and say why you like it Describe some other presents that you received Explain some of the things you did on your birthday 62
- Work is being done on the street where you live. The noise is disturbing you. Write a letter of complaint to your local council.•Introduce yourself•Explain what the problem is•Suggest solutions 73
- In many countries people are having health problems because they choose to live a unhealthy life. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem? 73
- A growing number of people rely on restaurants and convenience food rather than home cooked food to supply most of their meals What are the advantages and disadvantages of eating this way 93
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Yagnika, Just writing this letter to say thank yo...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 84, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...o be agree to look after my house while Im on the summer vacation and I want to gi...
^^
Line 5, column 17, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ld chores and trip. First thing is, Im going to visit Mumbai city with my fami...
^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
...floor, you can find three bedrooms. Whats more, I would like to make you aware ab...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 267, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: o'clock
...ccur. Secondly, maid will be there at 9 oclock everyday to clean house. Therefore, try...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 274, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...econdly, maid will be there at 9 oclock everyday to clean house. Therefore, try to stay ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g else from my side. Yours lovingly, Kajal Desai
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1123.0 937.175257732 120% => OK
No of words: 248.0 206.0 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52822580645 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29352556021 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 127.690721649 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641129032258 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 349.2 290.88556701 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7399459411 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.8666666667 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5333333333 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220118033157 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617431142024 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054967657372 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0991446645731 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583975129113 0.0580467560999 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.