The chart shows how frequently people in the USA ate fast food in restaurants between 2003 and 2013.
The degree of people in the USA ate fast food in restaurant between 2003 and 2013 was illustrated by the chart shown.
Overall, most people in the USA ate at fast food restaurant once a week and once or twice a month.
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In 2003, there was over 30 percent people ate at fast food restaurant once a week which is the habit of most people in this investigation. meanwhile, there was a little bit of people ate fast foods everyday or never to ate the<span style="font-size: 1.1em;">m. </span></div><div>
In 2013, there were various significant difference from 2003. In 2013, there was nearly 35 percent people ate fast food once or twice a month. Beside, the people that ate fast foods everyday or never to ate them was decline sightly from 2003. Also, there was a gradual increase in people that ate fast food a few time a year. A conclusion can be stated is that there was a tendency which people were decrease the time they ate fast food.</div>
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 801.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71176470588 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01810568697 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 78.0 106.607317073 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.458823529412 0.547539520022 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 238.5 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.764494772 43.030603864 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.0 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8888888889 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.11111111111 5.23603664747 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.465853535458 0.215688989381 216% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.252291745835 0.103423049105 244% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132989960779 0.0843802449381 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.366856256795 0.15604864568 235% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133318119271 0.0819641961636 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.76 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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