UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008
The bar chart gives information about UK graduate and postgraduate students who prefer other activities rather than full-time work after graduated from college in 2008. There were 3 kinds of activity will be figured out with full time work such as an exception. Overall, as can be seen that the biggest amount of graduates activity was obviously in further study likewise similar with the postgraduates trend which showed that the most of them decided to further their study markedly.
Regarding to the data, grads occupation which the most positive movement had to be in further education for the graduates which reached at 29.665 grads whilst similar case in postgraduates, the master grads mostly continued their study and it totally got at 2.725 grads. The second highest career path of bachelor happened to get contracted to take part-time job which at 17.735 grads markedly. Same case as in postgraduates, they also chose tp obtain part-time job and counted at 2.535 grads respectively.
Another career option, a part of graduates contributed their selves in voluntary which tabulated at 3.500 grads whilst the master grads who decided to be in voluntary happened to be 10 times lower than the bachelor grads’. Unlike with the former career destinations, some of the bachelor and master grads determined to be unemployed but just at 1.625 for the postgraduates and 10 times higher for the graduates.
- the sales made by a coffee shop in a a office building on a typical weekday 67
- The differences in wheat exports over three different areas 73
- Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems 73
- Many animal species are becoming extinct due to human activities on land and in sea 78
- Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 226, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...ds of activity will be figured out with full time work such as an exception. Overall, as ...
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Line 5, column 273, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ke with the former career destinations, some of the bachelor and master grads determined to...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, likewise, regarding, second, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1188.0 965.302439024 123% => OK
No of words: 229.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18777292576 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8002266401 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 106.607317073 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580786026201 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 283.868780488 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.9966895258 43.030603864 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.5 112.824112599 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.625 22.9334400587 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 5.23603664747 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169602372807 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.092857644419 0.103423049105 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119856962661 0.0843802449381 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127575249835 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108062745894 0.0819641961636 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.2329268293 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.