Do you think consumers should avoid over packaged product or it is the responsibility of producers?

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Do you think consumers should avoid over packaged product or it is the responsibility of producers?

surely, there has been no time in history where the lives of people have changed dramatically . A quik reflection on typical day reveals packaged products has been the one of prominent topics in the contemporary discussion. According to my view both producers and consumers have responsibility to avoid packaged products. which will be highlighted in upcoming paragraphs.

The first and foremost view is that, there are many demerits of polythene packaged products. Firstly, it results in the generation of many water borne diseases. Moving further, it create many environmental problems. For instance, people throw waste polythenes on the roads and into the rivers As a result of this it increase water pollution as well as animals drink polluted water of rivers that is not good for animals health.

Secondly, there are many food products are packed in plastic polythenes but after a long time plastic are mixed with food and it is the reason of many health related problems. Moreover, many masses are died after eating the packaged food.

In conclusion, according to my opinion packaged products are not good for health as well as not good for environment. Government should have responsibility to banned plastic packaged products and both consumers and producers have responsibility to avoid the packaged products.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Surely
surely, there has been no time in history wher...
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Line 1, column 94, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ives of people have changed dramatically . A quik reflection on typical day reveal...
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Line 1, column 323, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Which
...ponsibility to avoid packaged products. which will be highlighted in upcoming paragra...
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Line 1, column 323, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ponsibility to avoid packaged products. which will be highlighted in upcoming paragra...
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Line 3, column 135, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...irstly, it results in the generation of many water borne diseases. Moving further, i...
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Line 3, column 135, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun water seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much water', 'a good deal of water'.
Suggestion: much water; a good deal of water
...irstly, it results in the generation of many water borne diseases. Moving further, it crea...
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Message: Did you mean 'creates'?
Suggestion: creates
...ater borne diseases. Moving further, it create many environmental problems. For instan...
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Line 3, column 317, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'increases'?
Suggestion: increases
... into the rivers As a result of this it increase water pollution as well as animals drin...
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Line 5, column 102, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...polythenes but after a long time plastic are mixed with food and it is the reason...
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Line 5, column 148, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun health seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much health', 'a good deal of health'.
Suggestion: much health; a good deal of health
...mixed with food and it is the reason of many health related problems. Moreover, many masses...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 20.9802955665 43% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1117.0 1207.87684729 92% => OK
No of words: 210.0 242.827586207 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31904761905 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91275317942 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 139.433497537 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 351.9 379.143842365 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.0817769985 50.4703680194 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0833333333 104.977214359 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.9669160288 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 7.25397266985 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.33497536946 187% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2264973688 0.242375264174 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859453969101 0.0925447433944 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128463367199 0.071462118173 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151059807975 0.151781067708 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12935098334 0.0609392437508 212% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 12.6369458128 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.1260098522 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 55.0591133005 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.94827586207 60% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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