In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.
What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
People gain more weight by eating plenty of snacks and drinking soft drinks without enough exercise. The lifestyles result in their declining health levels. There are several causes which can lead to these severe healthy problems and it is high time that people took measures to address them.
Firstly, food containing much fat is usually popular among children. The young, especially primary school students extremely enjoy junk food like French fries which are crispy and smell good. Recently it has been surveyed that the total amount of calories in a box of French fries equal five bowls of rice. Secondly, people become increasingly lazy and they would rather stay at home watching TV than jog in the park. The energy they take in from food cannot be consumed and instead it is stored as fat. What's more, many workers hardly have time to exercise in the gym because they are required to work from eight in the morning to eight in the evening. Usually when they come home, they might do nothing but take a rest in bed.
In order to cope with these problems, I have two suggestions. To begin with, parents should ask their children to have more vegetables which comprise vitamin and eat less fried food. A balanced diet enables kids to keep fit and boost their immune systems. In addition, the managers can organize activities for the staff, such as climbing the mountains on weekends. Not only can they lose weight after sweating a lot, the cooperation can also be enhanced in the team.
All in all, for everyone, keeping healthy really matters a lot. The healthy food and exercising often contribute to everyone's health. With the measures mentioned above, I believe any one can make progress in keeping fit.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, really, second, secondly, so, in addition, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86394557823 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31240490347 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.676870748299 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.8783266675 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.4444444444 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154147912855 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0406358856751 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385673849682 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0903979265941 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524116571446 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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